Question

I had to make a poem to make people stop something is this good? It's about Animal Abuse.

Speak up and help!

I'm being taken home,
For the time in years,
But next thing you know I wish i could shed tears.

My owner comes outside,
With something in his hand,
"Oh Dear! It is a knife!",
He throws me in the sand.

Next thing you know,
My paw is cut up,
And he will not let me go.

It is so sad us animals can do nothing,
So speak up and help,
We cannot do but anything.

We cannot speak,
And you are bigger,
We cannot make but one peap.

So speak up and help,
Before more of

Answer 1

It was suppose to be "Before more of us Yelp"
at the end

Answer 2

Its Great. Take a few minutes then read it again for anything thats missing or needing to be added. It will help i swear. (;

Answer 3

thanks

Answer 4

Np and btw this poem is very inspirational.

Answer 5

Thank you. I'm one of those people who LOVE animals and to know they get hurt is a HORRIFIC feeling. Even though my ear lobe was torn off by a dog when i was age 3 i still love all animals.

Answer 6

I know how you feel my dog is literally my sister i love her so much.

Answer 7

Haha I have two dogs, Tucker and Gator. The best thing about them is that to know if they hurt you or anything the dog will always come back and apologize. And I don't know how some people could hurt such beautiful creatures. To me if I ever would to abuse an animal I would think about this first "Why do I need to take my pain out on someone else? What did the animal ever do to me?"

Answer 8

Even though I would NEVER abuse any animal of some sort (excluding insects...)

Answer 9

Lol yeah its terrible. ): i cringe everytime i see a dog hurt in any way.

Answer 10

Someone in my dad's neighborhood was slamming a deaf dog on the concrete for being deaf and then I almost got in a fist fight with the guy... I took the dog home and named her shadow because she LOVES chasing shadows but found her a home.

Answer 11

I can't believe someone would ever do that to a poor dog that can't even hear or talk or do anything to defend themselves.

Answer 12

Yea. Sometimes I listen to news stories and heard about these two dogs that were left outside in the 102 degree heat for almost a week without food or water... They both passed from sun poisoning...

Answer 13

And at the golf course someone threw a cat in the water with alligators. I got a call from a friend and they told me about it. I literally was chased by the alligator and almost KILLED just to save the cat. Like seriously... Putting an animal in danger can put like 1,000,000 people in danger. I would put my life in danger for a cat though.

Answer 14

Thats amazing that you did that.

Answer 15

So thanks for your nice comments about my poem and I will look over it again ^-^
And thanks. I really don't like animals getting hurt and I didn't want anyone to hurt the alligator

Answer 16

I understand np and never change your an awesome person c:

Answer 17

Ha thanks.

Answer 18

It's amazing! I love it! This is very inspirational and also brought tears to my eyes because of yulin 2015. I appreciate you for making this poem. Keep up the great work :3

Answer 19

Thanks ^-^

Answer 20

I love it! Well done.

Answer 21

dat was dope af