Question

How is my poem I wrote dedicated to my girlfriend:
The stars in the universe do not shine as bright as her. Someone I would never tell a lie. She is the one that could make me invent how to fly. She is like the whip cream on my apple pie. And when things go downhill we just say whatever because in our hearts we know we're together forever.

Answer 1

@ash2326 @sammixboo @Loser66 @pooja195 @mathstudent55 @Aureyliant @DarkMoonZ @Miracrown @preetha @Zedditup

Answer 2

@e.mccormick @uybuyvf @Wolverine32 @wavypop @dazednightdreams @batman19991

Answer 3

Its very good, but you need to change "cuz" to because.

Answer 4

Thank you for the feedback @dazednightdreams

Answer 5

No problem :)

Answer 6

Not bad:)

Answer 7

ill publish it. send it to my wife. (when i get older) and share it with people to give to there girls.