Question

Stay Alive, Written by AliceCullen.

(Verse 1)
She draws clouds in the sky
Everything she's ever known is a lie
They say that she'll be alright
It ain't no pretty picture tonight
She could tell you she's doin' fine
But behind her smile is

(Chorus)
The pain that's been done
Seen and heard by no one
The tears that she cries
When you hear her screams at night she just lies
Can't you see that behind this lie
She's looking for some reason in your eyes
To stay alive

(Verse 2)
She tries to hide her scars that she knows is real
And everyday all she tries is not to feel
At three am she's awake fighting with herself
She just wants to be seen and heard

(Chorus)
The pain that's been done
Seen and heard by no one
The tears that she cries
When you hear her screams at night she just lies
Can't you see that behind this lie
She's looking for some reason in your eyes
To stay alive

(Bridge)
This was the only life she's ever known
Now she digs a blade into her skin
She hates the feeling of being alone
But now, the demons win..

(Chorus)
You'd never had been able to tell before
Her story, her tears, and the horrible words
Well now she's standing up
She'd had enough (high note)

(repeat regular chorus)

Answer 1

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Answer 2

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Answer 3

They lyrics work well.
But in order to fully enjoy this you should at least give the chord progression you are planning to use, maybe some indication of rythm.

Answer 4

not bad u really have the raw talent to make music just keep working at it and you could go far

Answer 5

awesomeness

Answer 6

:)