Question

a poem let me know what you think

Answer 1

I tried to believe that you were different,
But the truth just let me down.
Realities patterns
Were beneath a see through surface.
The world will keep spinning
But its made out of mostly water
So wherever I stand I’m still going to sink.
I keep grasping for land
But the world just shuts me up.
Stuck in the ocean
Where buried treasure is left unfound.
And I clinched onto you for a while.
To keep my head above the water.
But we ended like the titanic.
Never letting go…
But in the end one of still drowns.

Answer 2

@Crissy15 @iYuko

Answer 3

That was really good...

Answer 4

@me10000 thanks