Question

write something, anything, that you feel. your deepest feeling right now. are you feeling any of these: sullen, bored, tired, angered, frustrated, irritable, lazy, et cetera. pick one to three emotions, and help to build your character by putting it into a poem.

Answer 1

Frustration

The keys type swiftly yet I grow no closer to my goal
a goal which seems impossible to master
I'll never make it yet I try but become angry when I don't succeed
no,
not angry,
frustrated
frustrated at myself
frustrated at the keyboard
frustrated at the world for putting me in this situation
but I must master this frustration,
make it my slave
not my enemy
for when I have beaten it
then,
I can suceed

Answer 2

I didn't know if you were looking for advice or asking us as a site to write our own poems but here's an example if you were doing this for a class

Answer 3

you did it perfectly NG27. but I it is really me who wants to give advice in a way. one thing I hope this will do for others is help themselves get it out. then, you need to see a way around it. here is one of my poems, NerdyGeek27...
I feel longing, and hurt.

Longing, longing, for people to love.
I know i'm loved, yes I am.
And I know i'm doubted, but I have to shove.
Building relationships aren't easy.
I'm hurt when others cannot see the potential that I do.
Longing for friendship makes me queasy.
I feel hurt when others over-doubt my abilities.
They doubt my strengths, my talents.
I'm not alone, I know, but I feel that that is so.
Every time i'm with someone, I feel out of balance.
Saying otherwise, I feel misunderstood.

And, I hope that this will give people a chance to relate to others, to show that we aren't all alone in the world. when you can relate, you will feel understanding. I just want to help people in any way that I know how to.

Answer 4

WOW

Answer 5

wow.... I like your poem Lihtkah, very similar to mine emotion right now