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OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

Need help Can someone plz look at my reflection journey on the novel brick lane and also you can plz look at my grammar and spelling.

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@Robert136

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@HWBUSTER00

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@help_people

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@HWBUSTER00 huh!! I was kidding thou

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@HWBUSTER00 sorry

OpenStudy (anonymous):

what???? your so confusing.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i dont know

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

can you plz look at my grammar

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

plz

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Brother

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Hey I am reading your writing

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Pay attention to the punctuations.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

You misuse commas a lot.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Would you like me to edit it all up nice and well written?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Give me 40 owl bucks and I will edit it up for you it's gonna take like 30 minutes

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

@Robert136 know you are goona take money from your bother

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

brother

OpenStudy (anonymous):

no fluttering way

OpenStudy (anonymous):

but I have to priotize certain things I love to help you

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Fok it I am gonna do it for you all free because you are my brother

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

thnx man!!

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

I will send a cup of coffee for you

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

np

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Alright done for the grammar edits you were missing a few commas and a couple of other stuff take a look

OpenStudy (anonymous):

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

bro thanks a lot

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I didn't make any major structural change because you said you only wanted your grammar changed so I made corrections to your grammar.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

LOL no kidding bro

OpenStudy (anonymous):

hugs

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

but is it a good reflective journey

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I think so. You sound pretty smart

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Look I know ENG4U is such a fokken pain in the retricebut hey you seem to be doing pretty ok at it.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

retricebut=butt

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

yeah I KNOW

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

LOL

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Anyway you take care bro let me know if you have questions

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

TAKE CARE AND BYE

OpenStudy (mtalhahassan2):

MAY GOD BLESS U

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Lol ou sounded quite fanatic mad bro

OpenStudy (anonymous):

anyway cheers chug up some beers

OpenStudy (help_people):

are you good then ?

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