Question

freestyle comment what u think

Answer 1

kingsexy
i got real talent like a girl with long nails
i hope i get a big house with a lot of mail
thats my one dream i got many
i want to have all 100s instead of pennies
im just getting started u almost finish
yall must not know what makes me different
im like a younger lil jon
how can i go wrong
just waiting for that one song
that i pick up the phone
answer it and hear them say they want me on
they want me long
then i put the phone down and hear ding dong
someone is at the door
is a bunch of fans saying they heard i was next
looked at the floor like it was about to break into the basement
i hope yall liked the story i said what i meant
most people would say it the other way around
but im different

Answer 2

I like the rhythm, the part share some of your dreams and goals, and how you say your unique, but I think some of the lines are a bit conceited.

Answer 3

Yo Khalil what's up dawg

Answer 4

To be bluntly honest, that was terrible

Answer 5

I like some of the lyrics, others were....not so good. The way you put it makes no sense and you sounded like a jerk.... sorry for being so blunt