Write two well-developed paragraphs telling which of King's images you find most powerful and appealing and explain why this image had meaning for you.
@AnnalieseBronz
its about martin luther king.
Tell me your thoughts, dear.
It's progress. What would you like help in?
What kind of essay is this? Is it a regular essay where there is an introduction,body, and conclusion?
Your responses are off to a great start. Would you like some suggestions on how to improve the essay? I'd say the opinions should be kept in there as a base. Keep in mind of logistics, specific examples and explanations, and to write as if no one's going to read it!
"It's stronger than any other image because there is enough hope in this single line to show the sad points behind his speech." How is it stronger than any other image? If you're going to use this sentence, then try to convince the reader with facts, examples, and proof.
lol idk what else to write
The second paragraph: It kind of leaves the reader wondering which of his dreams have come true and how they have come true, you know?
any suggestions on what else to write?
Why does the images possess meaning to you? Does it inspire you? Does it captivate you? How has Martin Luther King changed history? Did he change your life in any shape or form?
Another suggestion: Does the images connect with another event, person, speech, etc.?
I must be off to a shower, because today is my birthday. Let me hear the essay when you're finished. Remember: With trains, cars, and airplanes you can do anything! <3
Thank you, i have got the hold of it now! and happy birthday cx
Medal? :)
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