Question

Superheroes. (Song In Progress)
[Verse 1]
When our love was strong
Nothing could go wrong
We'd dance all night long
To our favorite song, yeah.
You were my Batman
I was Batgirl
We bought a piece of land
And we ruled the world
But then we fought Joker and you fell for his girl
He put up a fight , almost ended the world
I know what she's gonna do
I know what she's up to
She'll use you
And then leave when the sun shines
Baby your all mine
So Listen to me
And we can be

[Chorus]
Superheroes
Nobody can touch us now
Superheroes
Go ahead and take a bow
Cause this is our time
Our time to shine
We'll take over Gotham tonight
We can spend all day in the spotlight
Superheroes
You and I we can be
Superheroes

Answer 1

hmmm i like the song so far keep working on it

Answer 2

I'll be changing the lyrics as I see fit ;) and be working on Verse Two.. This really just came to me out of nowhere, as all my songs usually do.

Answer 3

Great Job Ali! I love it

Answer 4

rap song B) i can be yo rapper lol jk

Answer 5

lol huh?

Answer 6

her song kinda sounds like a rap

Answer 7

Oh

Answer 8

Its not supposed to be a rap...

Answer 9

Ik

Answer 10

i said it sounds like one uk verse one does

Answer 11

Eh..not to me

Answer 12

we all have different views

Answer 13

Tru... tru

Answer 14

This song is great and I like your profile pic

Answer 15

^ Agreed

Answer 16

Hey sweet pea

Answer 17

Hi

Answer 18

IM A DOCTOR!!!

Answer 19

lol thx for the medal

Answer 20

or did i already have a medal?

Answer 21

You already had one

Answer 22

it is awesome

Answer 23

this is verry good :)

Answer 24

Cool

Answer 25

i like it

Answer 26

Great job Alice that's beautiful for a song to ur boyfriend or lover

Answer 27

Good job with the song :)

Answer 28

Beautiful Song!

Answer 29

i love it

Answer 30

it is good song XD lol nice job

Answer 31

Sounds Great :)

Answer 32

Wow! Fantastic song! I'm really into poem and song writing. I also play piano and guitar, so please, feel free to ask my advice for any poems or songs you have. :D

Answer 33

@AliceCullen

Answer 34

Honestly, its good. But it would be better if you had rap somehow play into it, Just cuz of the song. But that's just me. Keep doing you!! :)

Answer 35

I like this good job and keep working on it. Someday this song might be on the radio. :D

Answer 36

Nice

Answer 37

Pretty good keep working!

Answer 38

not to be that person but if you want a little accuracy I would change the Batman and Batgirl part if you want to make it a song about romance. The song other than that little part is very good!

Answer 39

If it's called superheroes, you should use more than one superhero. :P

Answer 40

i love it! its a great theme for a song and i will be waiting to hear it one day :)
keep up the amazing work!

Answer 41

I like it c;

Answer 42

Please, refer to the following post:


http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/554bb631e4b08c324fbe2a0d



These are lyrics without any musical nomenclature or representation, no rythmical indication or melodic composition, which makes it but a plain draft for lyrics more fit for the writing section.