Question

can someone plz look at my grammar

Answer 1

Hamlet is one of the most famous tragedy plays written by William Shakespeare's at an uncertain date between1599 and 1602. In this play, Hamlet has faced a lot of difficult task thought out this play as he saying “There is nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so.”
The hamlet play also make some connections with the world it came from suck as like in the previous days when any kind died, then they choose other kind who have some relationship with the previous kind. Basically in those days, in Denmark, the new king was chosen by a combination of factors so at that time the Hamlet was not that older to be a kind, but then the Claudius the previous king brother use this advantages and become the new king.
But the more influence comes in the play, when the previous kind wife Gertrude decided to marriage with a new king Claudius which make Hamlet more angry and from that point he try to think that maybe his uncle kill his father. As one of the quotation from the play, making some connection with the world from where it comes from “To be honest, as this world goes, is to be one man picked out of ten thousand.” This quotation is describing that there's so much dishonesty in the way we live in this world, finding someone who's honest is like one in a million.

Answer 2

so basically i am connecting the hamlet play with the that time world

Answer 3

Should it be "Hamlet has faced a lot of difficult tasks throughout this play"?

Answer 4

do you want spelling mistakes to? or no

Answer 5

yes i do

Answer 6

Okay you wrote suck instead of such

Answer 7

@marymiller do you read a novel hamlet

Answer 8

Sorry what

Answer 9

the new king was chosen by a combination of factors so at that time the Hamlet was not that older to be a kind, but then the Claudius the previous king brother use this advantages and become the new king. Its just my opinion but this sentence doesn't make much sense

Answer 10

so what you want me to change here

Answer 11

I think it just needs a little bit of revising

Answer 12

Its just a bit of a run on sentence which is what makes it hard to follow

Answer 13

so how it be look like then

Answer 14

is kind supposed to be king?

Answer 15

the new king was chosen by a combination of factors. At that time the Hamlet was not old enough to be a king. Claudius, the previous kings brother used this to his advantage and became the new king. Does this make sense?

Answer 16

yes

Answer 17

Okay one second I'll revise the whole paragraph

Answer 18

I think you changed king to kind every time

Answer 19

i changed it

Answer 20

no worry

Answer 21

Hamlet is one of the most famous tragedy plays written by William Shakespeare's at an uncertain date between 1599 and 1602. In the play, Hamlet faced a lot of difficult tasks throughout this play. He said “There is nothing either good or bad, but thinking makes it so.”
The hamlet play also make some connections with the world it came from such as in the previous days when any king died, they choose others to be king who had some relationship with the previous one such as a son or a nephew. Basically, in those days in Denmark, the new king was chosen by a combination of factors so at that time the new king was chosen by a combination of factors. At that time the Hamlet was not old enough to be a king. Claudius, the previous kings brother used this to his advantage and became the new king.
But the more influence comes in the play, when the previous kings wife, Gertrude, decided to a marriage with a new king Claudius. This angered Hamlet and from that point he started to think that maybe his uncle killed his father. As one of the quotation from the play, making some connection with the world from where it comes from “To be honest, as this world goes, is to be one man picked out of ten thousand.” This quotation is describing that there's so much dishonesty in the way we live in this world, finding someone who's honest is like one in a million.

Answer 22

This is the revised paragraph. Just to help out a little bit. You should refrain from using the word "like" when you can avoid it

Answer 23

@marymiller thnx a lot

Answer 24

No problem

Answer 25

Hamlet was anger and jealous because he was not next in line to be crowed king

Answer 26

@deitalion It wasn't just about not being king

Answer 27

thnx a lot and bye

Answer 28

You do know you can go to Microsoft Word, paste that whole writing in and check any grammar mistakes and it will fix it instantly right? Just a quick tip.

Answer 29

@HelpMePlease1999 It won't help sentence structure though.. Or if you changed a word like in this situation "king" was changed to "kind" It wouldn't fix that