Question

my contradicting poems

Answer 1

your eyes are like stars in the night sky twinkling so beautiful up above your hair fralics like silk in the wind oh im so glad your my love but your skin shines like the sun and your cheeks blossoms like a rose in the spring oh how my love for you has no bend but will you love me till earths end will you stick with me through earth harsh cold wind will you be ready to sin
are you ready to throw it all away just to win again

Answer 2

i regret that
i rip that
i wrote this dont belive that
ill freaking die just so i can forget that
you said you loved my heart beat yeah well forget you
i hope you end up in a ditch.
imma try to mess you over real quick.
becuase all those words you gave me was bullshiz
no i regret all i gave you .
now i sit here and try to misbehave you.
i hope some on puts you in grave.
dont even pretend you remebr my name.
becuase of you i have gone so in sane.
it hurts so bad somebody get rid of my brain.
your hate has me in chains.
i hope some one cuts out your membrain.
i would apologize and cry you a river.
but im sitting here alone and in a shiver.
i dont even dare to give you a lip quiver.
im so mad its like lava in my veins.

Answer 3

@beckyg111 @MeowLover17 @Loser66 @pooja195 @Teddyiswatshecallsme @TuringTest @Donblue @freegirl11112 @LiveLaughDie @badmood @Nicoleegilmoree @morgannaj98 @zepdrix @iloveyou;* @Rushwr @Baby_Bear69

Answer 4

tell me what you think plz

Answer 5

they are both awesome and I love them great job

Answer 6

thnx plz tag people if you can

Answer 7

ok

Answer 8

They are Awesome!!

Answer 9

thnx

Answer 10

i will admit that the first one is a bit confusing and a little heavy in sensory details. but the second one is just wow...its beautiful, almost rythmatic. keep it up you're peoms are great

Answer 11

thnx alot and thnx for the open eye about the first one

Answer 12

please if you can tag your friends im writting peoms for some one and i need as much feedback as possible

Answer 13

@uybuyvf @Nnesha @aryandecoolest @BioHazard9064

Answer 14

@animalfan1 @DullJackel09 @yeval76

Answer 15

@lilbaby

Answer 16

@taramgrant0543664 @TuringTest

Answer 17

OMG You are wonderful! The best poems I have ever read... I actually understood and felt the feelings you tried to transmit with the words @Peaches15 @Loser66

Answer 18

thnx so much i apreciate your feed back i also do songs

Answer 19

thank you so much for the medals fam

Answer 20

I would love to see the songs that you wrote if I can.., That would be so cool.

Answer 21

@uri @s

Answer 22

You can message them to me

Answer 23

yes you will have to give me a minute

Answer 24

Ok

Answer 25

i also free style once in a blue moon

Answer 26

@imqwerty

Answer 27

I like them :) good job! Well done:D

Answer 28

thnx

Answer 29

Nice job bro thumbs up 👍

Answer 30

nice :)

Answer 31

i like it :)

Answer 32

Your not the only one @iloveyou;*

Answer 33

lol well of course im not the only one who likes it :) your point iiiiiiiisss?

Answer 34

Your the last to the party buddy everyone has already said the same thing

Answer 35

dosnt matter shes my girl so step down dawg

Answer 36

Well that's my bff so I don't wanna hear it best friends can say that stuff bro

Answer 37

@raiders88

Answer 38

Hey @Tazmaniadevil
i think the second one needs work

Answer 39

Is it okay if i help?

Answer 40

sure pm it to me and ill tell you if i like your tune up better

Answer 41

dude ur awesome

Answer 42

nice

Answer 43

thnx i also write song of many genres and i freestyle so if you need any help let me know

Answer 44

actually i need help with a love song

Answer 45

ok tag me fam

Answer 46

R.I.P. our hearts.
I'll die so that I can forget us apart.
You said you loved my heart, I used to love yours too.
I hope you end up in a ditch.
I will try to mess you over real quick.
All those words you gave me was bullpellet.
I regret all I gave you because now I sit here and try to misbehave you.
I hope some on pushes you in grave, and dont even pretend you remember my name.
Because of you I have gone so in sane, and hurts so bad somebody get rid of my ruined brain.
Babe your hate has me in chains, pellet.. hope some one cuts out your membrain.
I would apologize and cry you a river,
but im sitting here alone and in a shiver.
I dont dare to give you a lip quiver.
R.I.P.


Was it okay?

Answer 47

@isaac4321 @raiders88

Answer 48

wat

Answer 49

i love it good job

Answer 50

^ *Bull pellet

Answer 51

ughhhh im trying to write the bad word lol

Answer 52

no i really do it way better then mine

Answer 53

@CallMeKiki

Answer 54

I love them both. Amazing! C:

Answer 55

thank you thank you vry much

Answer 56

Man it was really good

Answer 57

thnx bruv aye wanan rap battle