The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.
Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.
The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.
If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.

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The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.
Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.
The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.
If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.

anonymous · Answer

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ckallerid · Answer

I think I've seen this question before. Is there another answer choice?

anonymous · Answer

yes

anonymous · Answer

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

 The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.
 The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.
 If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.
 With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

ckallerid · Answer

Well I'm sorry if I don't get it right but I think it's the fourth one.

"With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately." is repeated.

ckallerid · Answer

Sorry if I'm not the best at explaining T.T