Question

"when i die show no pity send my soul to juggolo city, burry my grave 6 ft deep put two matches by my feet put two watches on my chest and tell my homies i did my best

Answer 1

nice

Answer 2

yeah

Answer 3

you did not write this :/

Answer 4

omfg find it on google c for yourself

Answer 5

juggalos forever

Answer 6

that you wrote it?, because i know it is on google. I used to listen to Icp,

Answer 7

used to the words are not in one song i mixed it up using ALL the words frm a diff song

Answer 8

you are fake asf

Answer 9

u make a song go ahead it took me 5 hours

Answer 10

alysaaa, can you give me like 4 medals please? ily 4 evee <33 in mathmatics

Answer 11

ur not even a juggalo?

Answer 12

i was dip pellet, People change that sh*t is lame now

Answer 13

name icp their real names missy

Answer 14

Jospeh Bruce & joseph utsler Aka Violent J and Shaggy J 2 Dope

Answer 15

Shaggy 2 dope**

Answer 16

anymore retarded questions .-.

Answer 17

In terms of punctuation, grammar etc, ... "ouch". Some suggestions in []'s.

[W]hen i die[,] show no pity[.] [S}end my soul to [J]uggolo [C]ity, bur[]y my grave 6 ft deep, put two matches by my feet[,] put two watches on my chest[,] and tell my homies i did my best[.]"

Also, you don't bury a grave. You bury the coffin or cadaver *in the grave*. "Grave": a hole dug in the ground to receive a coffin or corpse, typically marked by a stone or mound.

I might also suggest that the opening premise - show no pity - is contradicted by a long list of silly stuff that needs to be done. Perhaps something like "Show no pity save insofar as is sufficient to [inset silly stuff here].

Apart from that, good stuff!

You'll get proper help over in the English section.

Answer 18

lol^^

Answer 19

did u look it up on google

Answer 20

what is a ninja Alysa888

Answer 21

@Alysa888 wifffeeeyyyy

Answer 22

myy wiffeyy left mehh :c