Question

As the author of this story, you can write about anything you choose. Your final story can be as short as half a page, but it must be a complete narrative with a beginning, middle, and end. Be sure to intentionally create pace with your sentence structure and include at least five lines of properly punctuated dialogue.

Answer 1

I feel a wet dampness in the middle of my palm. Opening my eyes, all I see is darkness corrupting me. Then my vision becomes clearer adjusting to the darkness. I feel my palm to discover the wet substance only to find out it is sweat. As I try to get up my legs give out and I'm paralyzed. My gut is telling me to run. Only if I could, I say to myself. Then a silvery voice follows.... “You’re going straight to my head, and I’m headed straight to the edge… I pick my poison and it’s you!” I recognize this immediately and shut eyes tight when I open them I’m in my bed room I think to myself that must be a dream. *the music continues to play from my ringtone on my phone* *Aero answers the phone*...”Hey who is this?”
"Wow can you look at ur contacts name before you ask? ....IT’S YOUR BEST FRIEND DUHHH!"

Answer 2

"Omg I'm sorry hey Charlie ....You know u woke me up?" There was a long pause before Aero heard sobbing on the other end. Aero: “Charlie what happened!?!?!? Are you ok? Answer me Charlie…!” “Ye….Yea…Yes Aero…” sobbed Charlie. “Tell me what’s going on…” “I will but I can’t say over the phone ill meet you at your house, be there soon!”

Answer 3

As I wait for Charlie to come over I start to tidy up the house my parents are on a business trip so I have the whole house to myself. Showing that I can clean after myself is a great way to show responsibilities and prove to them that I can be an independent young lady. Not even after five minutes of me wiping the kitchen cabinets, I hear a knock. I jump up in surprised because I was so focused on killing I totally forgot Charlie was coming over.

Answer 4

so focused on killing, do you mean cleaning?

Answer 5

xDDDDDD yeaaa lol..in Mircosoft I corrected it..but in reality I was focus on killing u

Answer 6

???

Answer 7

why kill?

Answer 8

btw not bad

Answer 9

but to me: feel a wet dampness in the middle of my palm... I feel my palm to discover the wet substance only to find out it is sweat. kinda set it off?

Answer 10

like why so much detail on one little thing?

Answer 11

also i did not understand what/why killing the reader has to do anything with the plot?

Answer 12

another thing, could you continue? I really liked it

Answer 13

..Um the word killing was a typo meant to be cleaning and I like to add detail to my stories I make so the reader can imagine being in the state the character is in or at least relate to it..

Answer 14

Its seems like a cool setup as a whole..Good job!

Answer 15

As I slow dragged myself to the door I checked the peephole of the door to make sure it was Charlie. When I opened the door she jumped on me caressing me in a warm hug with tears rolling down her face. She explains to me what happened- Her parents kicked her out because she didn’t complete her college credits so she didn’t have enough credits to finish her degree. We both sit down and I give her a shoulder to cry on and sympathy because I could remember how my parents were academically strict on me back then. After hugging her I explained to her that I’m going to order pizza she nodded yes. After calling up the Italian pizza place and ordering pizza I went to check on her and she was sleeping peacefully on the couch.

Answer 16

cool more? or is that it?