Which best corrects the phrase fragment?

Picking up several packages. The women rushed to the bus stop.

A.
The women rushed to the bus stop picking up several packages.

B.
The women rushed to the bus stop. The women picking up several packages.

C.
Picking up several packages, the women rushed to the bus stop.

D.
The women rushed picking up several packages to the bus stop.

Question

Which best corrects the phrase fragment? 

Picking up several packages. The women rushed to the bus stop.
	
	
 
A.
	The women rushed to the bus stop picking up several packages.
	
 
B.
	The women rushed to the bus stop. The women picking up several packages.
	
 
C.
	Picking up several packages, the women rushed to the bus stop.
	
 
D.
	The women rushed picking up several packages to the bus stop.

gabbyalicorn · Answer

B

gabbyalicorn · Answer

wait..err...

gabbyalicorn · Answer

Yeah, it's B...I believe.

anonymous · Answer

It is either C or A 
B is not correctly punctuated

gabbyalicorn · Answer

qq Okay, i'll try again.

gabbyalicorn · Answer

C sounds correctly, but I'm still a little iffy, because they switched the sentence a little.

anonymous · Answer

Lets break this down a little

First, what type of subject does this sentence have? (compound, complete, simple)

gabbyalicorn · Answer

which sentence? C?

anonymous · Answer

The sentence all together, the fragmented sentence. It still has a subject

gabbyalicorn · Answer

Oh, fragments. ^///^ my bad... I thought we were doing correct sentences.

anonymous · Answer

well this phrase we are looking at has a few main problems

answer these questions and you should realize the correct answer 

Is it punctuated correctly? 
Is the subject and verb correctly structured into the sentence?
How would you correct the Punctuation and Structure?

gabbyalicorn · Answer

yes.
I guess.
This sentence is fine on its own...

anonymous · Answer

What was the woman doing as she rushed to the bus stop?

gabbyalicorn · Answer

She picked up several packages.

anonymous · Answer

She was picking up several packages

They are presenting this as two sentences, when it should be one conjoined sentence
You would fix this by ______ ?

gabbyalicorn · Answer

I don't know. The sentence seems fine on its own. It doesn't seem like it needs fixing to me. :3

anonymous · Answer

Well C would be the correct way to fix this, it takes the compound subject and conjoins it with the correct punctuation (a comma)

gabbyalicorn · Answer

so, it isn't C, though. We are looking for a fragment.

anonymous · Answer

No we are looking for which best corrects the sentence which is already in fragments.

gabbyalicorn · Answer

Okay....so then, it would be C

anonymous · Answer

Yezzzz XD

gabbyalicorn · Answer

oh...I'm sorry it took me so long to get it. :{

anonymous · Answer

Its fine you just didnt read over the question carefully trust me I do that all the time XD

gabbyalicorn · Answer

cx