Help Me I don't know what to say for these MEDAL Eliminate the boring words and add as much detail as possible to the following sentences and do not use is were or was: 1.) Marry was afraid to receive the bad news. 2.) The lion was roaring.
Is there any words to pick from OR is it just by what you think?
Just add an action verb and make it your own
2.) The lion began roaring ?
would that work?
Yes
I am thinking about the first one.
Okay, thank you!! :)
Are you allowed to rearrange the sentence?
No
Mary was frightened to hear the horrible news.
Marry, frightened to receive the horrible news, picked up the ringing phone with trembling hands hoping that her cousin had lived through the surgery. The lion roars at the humans with his face covered in blood after having escaped the imprisonment of the man who locked him away in his cage.
@princess_sol she said you can't change the fundamental sentence
You also can not use the words "is, were, or was"
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