Question

iv got this crooked halo and my wings are broken

but its all that i know this angels love’s unspoken

iv got this crooked halo

somehow it lost all its glow

now im wandering in the dark

with nothing but this broken heart

its beating im breathing

but im not sure im alive

im trying to live out this life

i wanna thrive not just survive

so tell me now

please tell me how

how i can survive in a world like this

how i can make it in a world like this

Answer 1

one last embrace

one last kiss

please tell me how to live in a world like this

i look around and you know what i see?

i see a broken people

a broken humanity

i swear this is insanity

someone give me some clarity

im my own enemy

im in living in a fantasy

Answer 2

nice very beautiful

Answer 3

It's very beautiful! Your poem has a powerful, yet soft, singsong tone to it.
Though it would be best to capitalize and fix your grammar, I understand if you typed this out in hurry as soon as you got the idea! Sometimes I tend to type things out quickly when the idea hits me! Anyways, I love your poem. It's a passionate, romantic cry for help and it expresses the sharp desperation that the speaker feels. The rhythm goes smoothly, and there is no sharp jolts or words that shouldn't belong! Great job to you!! :)

Answer 4

Thank you @nawatobi:) I appreciate the time you took in writing this. I just typed it as fast as my chubby little fingers would type haha. But thank you i appreciate that

Answer 5

You're welcome! I would love if you'd tag me in any other poems you would happen to write! And, yes, I do the same a lot! Or sometimes I just find scribbles on scrap paper of some poems or ideas, haha :)

Answer 6

Absolutely:D

Answer 7

pretty as you

Answer 8

It is impossible for an angel to live on earth, as such creatures have not yet been proven factual. I'm sorry to burst your strange biblical fantasies, however I believe it is time to grow up "xx.fading_flower.xx" I am sorry for the inconvenience.

Answer 9

Im sorry you have the time to write such a ignorant and moronic statement. Its obviously representing something @Ryandaman but thank you for wasting my time to read that, or your time, which apparently isn't so precious for you to write such a fatuous comment.

Answer 10

Aw thanks @cristian306

Answer 11

Well, you are using vivid vocabulary to make yourself seem more intelligent than you actually are. You need to get over yourself and stop being so naïve to the world, or else GOD WILL THROW YOU INTO THE DEEPEST PITS OF HELL!!!..... have a glorious day

Answer 12

Aw thanks for calling my vocabulary vivid. i know you meant that as a insult but uh thank you sir. And thank you, i will have a glorious day:)