Anyone want to read over my essay? For grammar issues etc.
@EclipsedStar
What is it?
@jagr2713 If you'll post it or link it I would be happy to read over it for you
Oh sorry here u go https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SiwM9uhl2WuDmlhZW3srJBDZGur4vbplFbnFiazUbTI/edit
can't view it.....it says I need permission to view it. Sorry :(
i requested access
Ok try again sorry https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SiwM9uhl2WuDmlhZW3srJBDZGur4vbplFbnFiazUbTI/edit
@Nasa7 @texaschic101
@e.mccormick @pooja195
EclipsedStar, i did something stupid...
I see a some grammatical errors (first paragraph, third sentence should have a "?" instead of "."), and some capitalization ones...can you message me a link so I can suggest edits?
Yes i can :D i am just going to finish it off
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