Question

Words on my mind freestyle 1

Answer 1

(introduction)
This is just part one of freestyles I make they might even sound random and all over the place its just something I use to relieve stress posting this for fun don’t care for comments lol I also if its has any misspelling errors

(Freestyle)
This rap game it feels tedious im quite serious when it comes to picking up a mic my dad seems to think Im out of my mind for even thinking of pursuing a career like this I was never in it since the beginning the more mentally unstable I am I appears im better able to rap feel like iv lost my mind when im beginning to put a rhyme together in a different frame of mind when I put together a versed one train of thought one long sentence they tell me “you’ll never make anything on your raps” that’s cuz you douches haven’t bought it I try my hardest to keep the rage inside myself caged but when I spit on the mic I couldn’t restrain myself when I hurt you I couldn’t contain the fire burning inside so I f I left you in ashes I apologize but im not gonna apologize for putting my faith in rap better to put it in rap then the wrath I keep caged inside now I just sound like a mumbling idiot repeating what iv just been saying sorry one train of thought this rap I abuse sometimes to relieve my stress from reliving inside a certain moment sometimes I use the mic to elevate myself I apologize for sounding proud im just proud to be me and not a wanna be rapper because iv mastered my craft.

Answer 2

10 out of 10 would sing again

Answer 3

@animalfan1

Answer 4

@jabez177

Answer 5

Nice! It's pretty cool! :) I'll read it later, I'm doing homework... :P Tag me again and i'll get back to it later... I'm pretty sure it's nice... :)

Answer 6

Pretty good

Answer 7

wow.....i like it

Answer 8

a lot

Answer 9

Denny...

I think this was a great freestyle. However, I noticed a few lines that sounded REALLY familiar... I watch Dan Bull on Youtube, and I have heard his "Brit Raps Fast" video. Now, that being said, some lines in his video are as follows:

Dan's Line:
"My CD won't get me a mortgage, that's cause you wingspans haven't bought it..."

YOUR line:
"They tell me 'you won't get anywhere with your raps,' that's cause you douches haven't bought it."

Dan's Line:
"I tell myself that I'm proud to be me."

YOUR Line:
"I'm just proud to be me..."

Other than that, it was great.

Answer 10

dull this is AWESOME!!!!! i love it :3

Answer 11

@Zyi6 lol thats actually odd my rap sounds similar i dont bite from other artist lol

Answer 12

@Tazmaniadevil

Answer 13

@DullJackel09 you were beast man