Question

MEDAL/FAN FIVE Q.

Question 1 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Which sentence includes an announcement phrase that should be eliminated to make the statement more concise?

Assigning lockers to middle school students is an effective way to teach them time management.
Lockers should be provided to middle school students so that they can learn time management.
Middle school students would learn time management if they were provided lockers.
This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management.

Question 2 (Multiple Choice Wort

Answer 1

@Rainbowdash12

Answer 2

@Nnesha

Answer 3

@jessie13

Answer 4

@emily_wilson

Answer 5

@Michele_Laino

Answer 6

@milliebobillie

Answer 7

Question 1 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Which sentence includes an announcement phrase that should be eliminated to make the statement more concise?

Assigning lockers to middle school students is an effective way to teach them time management.
Lockers should be provided to middle school students so that they can learn time management.
Middle school students would learn time management if they were provided lockers.
This essay proves that middle school students should have lockers to learn time management.

Question 2 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

The passage below can be revised to make it more concise. Which word is a modifier that can be eliminated because it adds no meaning?

Dr. Madison is somewhat skeptical about stories of global warming. She has gathered scientific data in remote areas to prove her position.

Somewhat
Global
Scientific
Remote

Question 3 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Read the paragraph and answer the question that follows:

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.
The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.
If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.
With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Question 4 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Read the following passage and answer the question that follows:

Ashton enjoyed studying drama in high school. Ashton plans on studying drama in college.

Which choice best combines the sentences to eliminate repeated words while maintaining the meaning?

Ashton enjoyed high school and plans on studying drama in college.
Ashton enjoyed drama in high school and plans on studying it in college.
Ashton enjoyed studying drama in high school and plans on studying in college.
Ashton enjoyed studying drama in high school and plans on studying drama in college.

Question 5 (Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)

(MC)

Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

Historical buildings in the small Kansas town were completely destroyed by the unexpected storm.

Which word may be eliminated to remove redundancy?

Historical
Small
Completely
Unexpected

Answer 8

is what i need help on

Answer 9

@emily_wilson

Answer 10

On #1 I think is the the second or third

Answer 11

just say it like this
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.

Answer 12

@joeyboy111

Answer 13

yo waz up, you should probably post 1 question at a time, you putting this many words makes me too lazy to read a question...

Answer 14

The passage below can be revised to make it more concise. Which word is a modifier that can be eliminated because it adds no meaning?

Dr. Madison is somewhat skeptical about stories of global warming. She has gathered scientific data in remote areas to prove her position.

Somewhat
Global
Scientific
Remote

Answer 15

@joeyboy111

Answer 16

i think its a

Answer 17

Read the paragraph and answer the question that follows:

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.
The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.
If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.
With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Answer 18

I dont really know but I'd say A