Freestyle rap about emotions. This rap is just to see what comments I can get. I have been working on my raps with @Tony00075309aabbc, and I want to see if I have gotten to the "ight" level of rap. Let me know! Give me a few to post...

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zyi6 · Answer

Some people take me for a joke,
thinking that they me choke,
when it's the facts they don't know,
I get hate cause my raps are slow,
It's no surprise that they hate,
they can't see that this is my fate,
I fight back, they say "you w8 m8."
well look at the time on the clock,
my words are lethal as a glock,
This doesn't make much sense,
but now that I'm done,
I feel loosened,
like I've been set free,
only to be caged later,
by my boy Tony!

(Just thought I would give my friend a shout out there....)

anonymous · Answer

omg that was good cx

zyi6 · Answer

eh.... I dunno bout that.

anonymous · Answer

i likes it :3

zyi6 · Answer

literally the WORST rap I have ever done... but it was like 8 in the morning. WAY to early to flow correctly.

anonymous · Answer

nah i liked it tbh

deana99 · Answer

@Zyi6 is really good at rap but @Tony00075309aabbc is better at Poems then raps

anonymous · Answer

Yo, bro, go slow,
It takes time to flow, ya know,
You get there in slow mo,
but then after the show,
You gon have to lay low,
Cause everyone'll want ya dough,
You'll be the best, with practice,
But you gotta wait for the rest,
Blood, sweat n' tears,
Maybe a few years,
Then you'll be near,
Those you now fear,
So take your time, slow n' steady,
eventually you'll be ready,
TIll then, patience, dude,
Wait till you aint a newb xD

deana99 · Answer

that's why i was going to see if one can help me with something

zyi6 · Answer

@deana99, Tony has still helped. Poetry and Rap can, and often do, go hand in hand.

deana99 · Answer

Yea i know