Question

Hiding the hurt, hiding the pain
Hiding the tears that fall like rain.
Saying I'm fine, when I'm anything but,
This ache in my soul rips at my gut.
My skin is on fire, I burn from within.
The calm on my face is an ongoing sin.
The world must stay out, I've built up a wall.
My fragile lie will collapse should it ever fall.
Loneliness consumes me, it eats away the years
Until my life is swallowed by unending fears.
Waiting for someone to see I wear a mask
And care enough to remove it, is that too much to ask?

Answer 1

How did I do on this one please don't be afraid to tell me how it is

Answer 2

@GracieBugg @demonchild99 @M3GA-BIT3 @Crissy15

Answer 3

You did great :)

Answer 4

Thanks that makes me feel better

Answer 5

your welcome :) I'm a daughter hiding my depression, a sister trying to make a good impression, I'm the girl sitting next to you hoping that you'll be my friend this is me saying I don't know what to do

Answer 6

That was good :)

Answer 7

Thanks :)

Answer 8

Your welcome :)

Answer 9

@Destinycholie read the poem

Answer 10

Well the poem is amazing i love it... but i am here to talk to i mean i know i have been away for a while but i still care about everyone. i am always here.

Answer 11

Thnx

Answer 12

ME @@@@@@2!

Answer 13

I love this so much. I hope you continue to write, because this is beautiful.

Answer 14

Thnx