I am slowly sinking deep and deeper into a ocean of thoughts and you stand at the surface and watch me drown but why would you do that you said that you loved me only then when I went under water and drowned did I realize you was lying.

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anonymous · Answer

Thanks for the medal @Crissy15 :)

crissy15 · Answer

No prob XD

studytheworld · Answer

I am slowly sinking deeper and deeper into an ocean of thoughts and you stand at the surface and watch me drown. Why would you do that, when you said you loved me? Only then, when I went under water and drowned, did I realize; you were lying.

I'm not sure if you wrote that yourself or if you meant to make it so it didn't follow the grammar rules of English. But I just edited for you because it was one, big run-on sentence. ^-^ It's really good though, if you wrote it.

anonymous · Answer

Thanks