Question

Can someone tell how this sounds so far?

Answer 1

All day long
I've been trying
To believe I'm strong
But I'm lying
I was
Never meant to breathe

All night long
I've been crying
Can't you see
That I'm dying
It was
meant to be

All life long
I'll be searching
Can't you see
How I'm hurting
It was
Never meant to be

Answer 2

it's cool

Answer 3

I like it :)

Answer 4

@Marie1738 Its correct the way it is type. It was meant to be, meaning I was meant to die.