Question

Who wants to check my essay for grammar or any errors they see?

Answer 1

what essay? @jagr2713

Answer 2

do you guys want to see it?

Answer 3

Yeah, I'll check. :D

Answer 4

ok give me a sec

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kHyim4eEFytUd3vMqD8vo8jdVk0zBnC80dSXmns4V3E/edit

Answer 5

Sentence 4, no comma after "Well"

Answer 6

thanks what else

Answer 7

i'm still reading. :D

Answer 8

Do you have a title for your essay?

Answer 9

Yea its at the top

Answer 10

I'm still checking over it, almost done.

Answer 11

Tag me please, I have to switch computers and I wanna be able to find this.

Answer 12

@GrammaticalMistake

Answer 13

its seems ok 2 me

Answer 14

Thanks

Answer 15

Okay, I checked it. :D I printed a physical copy and marked it with pen, then scanned it and uploaded it here. Hope I helped! Good luck with your essay. :)

Answer 16

@jagr2713

Answer 17

Sorry back

Answer 18

Ok thanks for the corrections "D

Answer 19

Where it says "to a school that had no money", sorry, no mistake there.

Answer 20

Oh no problem! It was fun. I'm glad I could help!

Answer 21

Ok thanks

Answer 22

I see no indentation for your paragraphs. Also, never start your "Conclusion" paragraph with ," In conclusion." Not only do teachers and readers alike abhor it, it is without creativity and a poor way to start a paragraph. No matter what type of essay youʻre writing, you should want to constantly intrigue the reader, donʻt bore them.

TLDR - Remove "In Conclusion" and find another way to start your final paragraph