Question

What are some themes you can gather from this piece of writing?

Answer 1

What kind of student were you?
I was a dedicated and determined student. I would be the kid who sat in
the front and worked the whole class period while everyone else was playing
around and socializing. I would be the kid to always ask questions when I had
them. When I had a 99% in a class I would ask the teacher if I could get extra
credit just to get that 100% A. as a student I was looking to be as successful as I could be.
2. Do you have any favorite stories from school?
Well, one of my biggest stories is when I got a concussion in weights
class, junior year of high school, and I had to start doing online schooling
because I wasn’t able to heal fast enough to stay in public school. I remember
losing all of my friends and turning my whole life around. Of course there were
other factors holding me back from going back to public school such as the
embarrassment from getting the concussion in the first place. Ironically enough I was the one who never got any injuries in sports.
3. Who were your best friends? What were they like?
My best friend growing up has always been Kelsea Miller. We met in third
grade because we both were holding our legs pretending they were babies. She is
one of those people that you would not picture as my best friend. Her hair is
died and she wears a lot of makeup and her personality is carefree. Kelsea was
younger than me by about 6 months and you would definitely be able to tell, her
maturity was always slightly behind what it should’ve been. This was weird
because I have always been the exact opposite of that. Surprisingly we are
still friends up to this day. Goes to show that bestfriends can last a lifetime if you work at it.

Answer 2

Also is there anything you think I can do to improve this piece of writing?

Answer 3

A couple themes:

1. Some people are more motivated/dedicated to school than others.
2. One tiny mishap can change your whole life.
3. True friends are there for you forever.

Answer 4

There are a few grammatical and spelling errors, but other than that it is great!

Answer 5

For example, when you are speaking about hair, you use dyed instead of died.

Answer 6

okay thanks!!