Question

I've written part of a story called "The Grandfather Clock" it's on allpoetry.com
Need feedback!

Answer 1

if the one I read was urs x wow nice. i would've ended the poem with just the "and so did the heart of the grandfather clock" and wouldn't have added the "it never chimed again!" Either way it was a good little read :)

Answer 2

My username on the site is SilverRaven
unfortunately you have to make an account to see it.