Which strategy would best improve the coherence of this paragraph?
My grandfather, Joseph Pavlich, was a daring and adventurous man. At age eighteen, Joseph joined the Marines with a large group of Joseph's high school classmates. After weeks of challenging training, Joseph spent six months touring the Mediterranean Sea by boat. It was aboard this ship that Joseph earned Joseph's first medal of merit.
A.
using synonyms
B.
using transitions
C.
using pronouns
D.
using repeated words

Question

Which strategy would best improve the coherence of this​ paragraph?
My​ grandfather, Joseph​ Pavlich, was a daring and adventurous man. At age​ eighteen, Joseph joined the Marines with a large group of​ Joseph's high school classmates. After weeks of challenging​ training, Joseph spent six months touring the Mediterranean Sea by boat. It was aboard this ship that Joseph earned​ Joseph's first medal of merit.
A.
using synonyms
B.
using transitions
C.
using pronouns
D.
using repeated words

anonymous · Answer

C. Using Pronouns