Question

Finally got another song to give a test drive, Tell me what ya'll think!!
BTW not yet finished

Answer 1

The Best of Us

My melody is a remedy and makes a loud production,
gives people concussions
wow its just so beautiful,
its such a big hit

(the sound of wingspaning a gun {Chick chick})
BANG!

Ooo yah uh huh, uh huh
my melody
melody wait never mind its just me your remedy,
I hope you enjoy me,
rollin' and strollin
wit me,
livin and lovin against me,
fighting over nothin like puppets combustin,
head over heels in love with our somthing,
I mean just kiss me,
bliss me,
wake up with me,
love me,
hate me,
but always be my baby,
when your with me,
I feel you,
your melody,
oh your such a harmony,
oh baby your startin to make me crazy,
all these harmonies in my head is making me dead,
oh the love
the best of the best,
now its time to rest
SHHHHHHHH!
(Whispering)
Your beauty
Your smiles
I can see you in my eyes
your my grand prize
I finally have a power
your love is my drug every single hour
oh
(Normal Voice)

Hey baby,
Your crazy,
Freak of nature baby,
your my baby,
I admit it,
your my kind of people
a sequal,
an eagle,
you already beat the Beetles,
Let it be,
join me in my submarine,
its yellah,
you are just so stellah,
join me in the back of my Chevy empallah,
cruizin'
Everybodies losin'
I'm winnin' your not just another begginnin,
your my life supply,
just trust me,
these bustez,
touch this,
I love you straight to peaces,
I'm bleedin'
you help me,
Dang your such a harmony,
believe me,
I hope I'm not dreamin'
Pinch me,
nope its real sweet,
realtree,
your are my mossy oak baby,
strong,
filled with muscle,
country to the back bone,
Backbone?
Backbone
your my stronger back bone,
you bring on the bang,
yah feel me,
I feel you,
I'm glad I'm finally with you,
Oh baby
baby
You just drive me crazy,
But I got you,
Your heartbeat,
your my harmony
I'm not a prodigy,
just a hard worker from the Dean's List.
But most of these rappers doin' so-so like a seamstress,
Girls you talk like you got it all,
But you don't got it all,
Got it all- got it all,
I hardly think so,

BAM!

Answer 2

@Tazmaniadevil
@GracieBugg

Answer 3

"test drive" XD

Answer 4

Yea lol

Answer 5

wow that was XD lol

Answer 6

Thanks :D

Answer 7

dropped bars on OS lol good job

Answer 8

Thanks @Twilkis12

Answer 9

likez it

Answer 10

Thanks @january123