Question

Can someone check my work?

Directions:
Choose a French-speaking country you would like to visit.
Write at least 5 complete sentences.
Specify the month you will visit.
Describe what the weather is like during the season you choose.
Mention at least three articles of clothing that you will need for the trip.
Mention at least two activities you will participate in during the trip.

My work:

Cher Michael,

Bonjour! Comment ça va? Je voudrais visiter la France. Je vais en novembre. En novembre il est l'automne et il fait du vent. Je vais avoir besoin de l'écharpe, les bottes, et le manteau. Je fais des courses et de l'équitation.

À bientôt!

Answer 1

@mathmate @vvvbb

Answer 2

You have well communicated your ideas, a couple of points you can do to improve:
1. you could apply the "futur proche" that you have just learned to describe the things you would need when you go to France, like in the third sentence, "je vais avoir besoin de ..."
2. when you are enumerating multiple things, the prepositions "de" and "en", if present, need to be repeated. An example would be:
" Elle a besoin de calme, de repos. "
and note that de+les => des, de + le => du, etc.

Answer 3

"Je vais avoir besoin de l'écharpe, des bottes, et du manteau."

Would be correct?