My name is Maddox Smith. 2I am the Treasurer of the San Marcos High School Charity Club. 3We're having a canned food drive. 4This event is going to be off the hook and raise lots of dough for the homeless peeps. 5It's just two weeks away and I am writing to ask for your help. 6The Charity Club is planning to place collection boxes for canned food items at various local stores. 7We'd love it if you would allow us to place a bin at Shop Mart. 8All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who are really, super poor.

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anonymous · Answer

here is the question
Choose the revision of sentence 8 that is most appropriate for a persuasive proposal

here are the choices
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who are in need of the service.
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who are really needy.
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who do not have any money or food.
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who can't afford food because they spend their money unwisely.
The sentence is appropriate as is.

pinkcandyrosez882 · Answer

What do you think?

pinkcandyrosez882 · Answer

That is, which one seems most professional?

pinkcandyrosez882 · Answer

Or formal

anonymous · Answer

c @pinkcandyrosez882

pinkcandyrosez882 · Answer

Okay. That one seems good but A also seems formal as well. What do you think of A also?

anonymous · Answer

yes

pinkcandyrosez882 · Answer

Okay. I would say go with whichever of the two you think are correct. I was thinking A but it might be C, as well. So I would say go with your best guess :)