Question

Is this a grammatically correct sentence?

I have changed from a girl who was self-centered, doubtful, and afraid of the future; to a woman who is selfless, full of confidence, and walks in the world fearless.

Answer 1

yah

Answer 2

but i would cut the sentence in half

Answer 3

Okay thank you! Would this be better?

I once was a girl who was self-centered, doubtful, and afraid of the future. I have changed into a woman who is selfless, full of confidence, and walks in the world fearless.

Answer 4

actually that's perfect XD

Answer 5

thanks for the medal