Question

Can some help me add dialogue to this?! WILL MEDAL!

Answer 1

When he left Proserpina started to plot her way of escaping while she is completing King Pluto's tasks. For the falling action King Pluto is preparing lunch for Proserpina. As he insists that she eats he notices that his dog is barking. He tells the dog to quiet down until he started to notice Cerberus whine. That was when he saw Ceres enter through the front door. Ceres blasts at King Pluto yelling at the top of her lungs with full rage. King Pluto put up a guilty face and said that all he wanted was to feed her and that he found her wandering in the woods so he took her to his palace. Ceres then signaled Proserpina to come to her but before she can reach her King Pluto gets a hold of her. With a grin on his face he tried to manage some kind of negotiation to make a deal with Ceres for them to live with him and be his maids, but before he can finish his sentence Ceres casts a spell on him and placed King Pluto in a death hold of vines. After the spell King Pluto then started to worry more about his life than the maid negotiation. He then reconsidered his negotiation. He gave Proserpina to Ceres and then promised never to mess with either of them again. After that Ceres let him go. Ceres is on her way out with tears of joy and relief with Proserpina.

Answer 2

@KAKES1967 @ganeshie8 @TorilovesVampires

Answer 3

@Anaise

Answer 4

it just needs dialogue for a final draft.

Answer 5

Do you understand anything about making the dialogue? We can work from there!

Answer 6

@Anaise a little bit yes

Answer 7

@DALLINATOR720 @Elsa213

Answer 8

Ok , tell me what you have so far.

Answer 9

@Anaise I have this and I need to add dialogue for the final draft
The beginning of this story will start off with King Pluto settling Proserpina into his palace and preparing her for the job of being his maid. With no warning whatsoever Proserpina ignores King Pluto. The reason why she ignores King Pluto is because of a flashback of her mom (Ceres) telling her not to go near seaside. King Pluto reacted to this by snapping her back into reality, telling her not to worry about her past life and anybody worrying about her because he is not a bad man and he will give her a better life than the one she once had before. After this Pluto began to think that Proserpina may try to escape and never return. For the climax of this story King Pluto goes and lives on his daily routine. When he left Proserpina started to plot her way of escaping while she is completing King Pluto's tasks. For the falling action King Pluto is preparing lunch for Proserpina. As he insists that she eats he notices that his dog is barking. He tells the dog to quiet down until he started to notice Cerberus whine. That was when he saw Ceres enter through the front door. Ceres blasts at King Pluto yelling at the top of her lungs with full rage. King Pluto put up a guilty face and said that all he wanted was to feed her and that he found her wandering in the woods so he took her to his palace. Ceres then signaled Proserpina to come to her but before she can reach her King Pluto gets a hold of her. With a grin on his face he tried to manage some kind of negotiation to make a deal with Ceres for them to live with him and be his maids, but before he can finish his sentence Ceres casts a spell on him and placed King Pluto in a death hold of vines. After the spell King Pluto then started to worry more about his life than the maid negotiation. He then reconsidered his negotiation. He gave Proserpina to Ceres and then promised never to mess with either of them again. After that Ceres let him go. Ceres is on her way out with tears of joy and relief with Proserpina. When the two finally leave his palace, King Pluto fixes himself up, goes into his master bedroom and starts thinking of other ways to get new maids.

Answer 10

@ganeshie8 please help

Answer 11

@kevin_bridges @Falling_In_Katt @Anaise @james1769 @KJSaif @Shalante

Answer 12

wow thats alot

Answer 13

that is what I have so far and it can have internal dialogue.

Answer 14

@pooja195 @lakota1999

Answer 15

um

Answer 16

@ArcticReeses @Falling_In_Katt

Answer 17

@Sam_and_Deans_doll @SamsungFanBoy @Kate_J2002

Answer 18

Someone help me out!

Answer 19

@YoungStudier @DALLINATOR720 @Shadowknight6263 @Anaise

Answer 20

I need internal dialogue please

Answer 21

@Loser66 @AlexandervonHumboldt2 @batman19991 @CloverRacer @the_ocean_girl @erica0000000 @haleyelizabeth2017 @KendrickLamar2014 @Anaise @ShirouxGhoul @fryfry2003 @JOHN__22 @pandaluvs @binkeyboy03 @MikeyMaximum @Nnesha @NotTim @YoungStudier

Answer 22

@HelloKitty17 , I would try posting this in the writing section as well, maybe people could help you over there. :)

Answer 23

im trying to help

Answer 24

I don't doubt you are @lakota1999 , I'm just makin a suggestion......

I'm trying not to sound like a jerk......I don't think it's working.....

Answer 25

?????

Answer 26

I was suggesting that if she wanted another opinion, she could post it in writing and that maybe someone could help her over there....

Answer 27

oh

Answer 28

Yup...

Answer 29

littel late but yea

Answer 30

help please

Answer 31

@OregonDuck

Answer 32

@Destinyyyy

Answer 33

The reason why she ignores King Pluto is because of a flashback of her mom (Ceres) telling her ( Proserpina ) "Now Proserpina don't to go near seaside." replace it with this

Answer 34

Alright put the dialogue should be in the middle like where you lighted

Answer 35

it is fine it fits in right there

Answer 36

can you add more dialogue to other parts?

Answer 37

only 1 more ok?

Answer 38

alright but is needs to make almost like a conversation between the mom and daughter

Answer 39

it can;t it is interal duh

Answer 40

well there can be more than type of dialogue

Answer 41

@YoungStudier need help

Answer 42

can you go on the math section can try to get people to help me?!

Answer 43

just leave it is good story

Answer 44

@VampirePrincess159

Answer 45

@KAKES1967

Answer 46

@LovinD_123

Answer 47

can you get a mini conversation please. that is it.

Answer 48

With stem-changing verbs, the stem often does not change for ____.
a. first and second person singular
b. first and second person plural
c second and third person singular
d second and third person plural

Answer 49

why are you asking your question UNDER OUR QUESTION?!?!?

Answer 50

No one is in my question lol

Answer 51

do don't do that.