Question

Shooting Star and Beyond the Mountains. Please tell me what you think and please be honest. :) Also, Shooting Star will be made into a song.

Answer 1

Shooting Star
by Meadow Taylor

You make me believe
That you’re a perfect shooting star,
Perfect just the way you are,
Because to me,
You’re perfect in every way;
You never fail to make my day.
Now listen to me,
I truly wish you the best,
Because life is more than just a test…
Life is friendship,
Life is good.
Life is caring,
Understood?
Life is a lesson
To be learnt.
Life is time
To be spent.
Use time wisely,
Life is short…
Because you’re a perfect shooting star,
Perfect just the way you are,
Because to me,
You perfect in every way.
You never fail to make my day.

Answer 2

Beyond the Mountains
by Meadow Taylor

Beyond the mountains,
Beyond the sea,
There’s a land
Where everything’s free.

All the creatures
Are willing to give
Anything if it means
Another could live.

Some creatures in that land
Are simply ordinary,
While others
Are quite legendary.

Fairies and butterflies
Flutter through the air,
While birds and dragons
Fly as high as they dare.

Serpents and swans
Skim the surface of the waters,
While tiny fish play with
The mermaids and their daughters.

Cute little bunnies hop about
And chase each other ‘round and ‘round,
While reindeer prance and dance
So graceful, so sound.

Whether they prance through the tall, green grass,
Soar through the sky that has no end,
Or glide to and fro in the shimmering water,
No creature lives without a friend.

Answer 3

dude thats so beast man like daum

Answer 4

dude can i feature you

Answer 5

man i love your rymes i love rappers that ryme a lot you know how i read all that

Answer 6

i was rapping it all

Answer 7

lmao i was saying it all fast and dude thats amazing

Answer 8

Great!! Thank you so much!!! Yes, of course you can feature me if you want!!! \(\ddot\smile\)

Answer 9

wow, it was beautiful. you are great and i hope you keep doing all of this because this is amazing.

Answer 10

@karimsari332, thank you so much! I can promise you I will keep doing it. I am already working on another one.