Question

Could someone give me some advice on a thesis?

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@zepdrix

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@ShadowLegendX

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Post the infos

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"Is decision making a crucial part of children’s/teens development?"

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Thats all I got Lol

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Is that the prompt?

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or your attempt at a thesis

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And "Are parents restrictions enabling child development?"

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Thats my attempt at a thesis..

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What is the prompt

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Parents restrictions over there child. kind of thing

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I need the prompt if I am to help you

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Explain what the prompt would be?

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Prompt: In Canada, the weather is cold this time of year

Thesis: Canada is cold this time of year because of itʻs location, the season time and the winds

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I gave my take on the prompt, supporting my choice with three reasons

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The following three body paragraphs, each supporting one reason

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Decision making is a crucial part of a child's development

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Thats my prompt I guess

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I need to know what the prompt is, so we can properly form a thesis

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ok, thatʻs it

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Ok, now you need to know, how or why is decision making a crucial part of a childʻs development

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From there, you get your three reasons

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and BAM, u got a thesis, easy

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Decision making is one of the most important skills your children need to develop to become healthy and mature adults. Decision making is crucial because the decisions your children make dictate the path that their lives take. Teaching your children to make their own decisions has several benefits. When they make a good decision, they can gain the greatest amount of satisfaction and fulfillment because they chose it. When your children make bad decisions, they may suffer for it, but they can learn from the experience and make better decisions in the future.

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State the three reasons, all in one paragraph

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I mean sentence

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Right after because, you need to have your three reasons, that support your claim

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Decision making is a crucial part of a child's development because it is pathing there way to adulthood, to indicate the path there lives will follow, and make bad decisions, they may suffer for it, but they can learn from the experience and make better decisions in the future.

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Need's correct. but is that better?

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Decision making is a crucial part of a child's development because it is pathing(paving is a better word, pathing is actually incorrect) there(their is the correct word) way to(too is a better word for this) adulthood, to indicate the path there(their is the correct word, again) lives will follow, and make bad decisions, they may suffer for it, but they can learn from the experience and make better decisions in the future.

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Thesis seems good, you just had spelling errors

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Is it too long? or does it go off topic?

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Well, I think you can shorten it. Remember, thesis goes in your introductory paragraph. There, you have a hook, first, then thesis + some information about what youʻre going to talk about. But you want to save all the good stuff for the three following paragraphs

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How would I shorten it?

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Decision making is a crucial part of a child's development because it is paving their way too adulthood, and helps to indicate the path their lives with follow.

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I mean, itʻs kinda fine actually, just try to add more to your introductory paragraph with a nice hook, and a couple more sentences to make it qualify as an actual paragraph

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*will follow

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and you need your third reason

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Decision making is a crucial part of a child's development because it is paving their way too adulthood, builds effective life skills, and helps to indicate the path their lives with follow.

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will*

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There we go!

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I like it

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Thank you!:)

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1st and 3rd reason sounds a bit similar tho, try to make the 3rd reason have a bit different meaning, and I think you will be fine

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You donʻt want to have two paragraphs talking about the same thing (indicating paths...paving ways, similar...)

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choosing between possible solutions to a problem?