Hey can someone help me?

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seneca1 · Answer

With what?

alexandervonhumboldt2 · Answer

what is your question

anonymous · Answer

what is your question?

anonymous · Answer

It's not actually for math, but I really need help with this writing this its to find punctuation mistakes and what not

anonymous · Answer

Ok. did you post it in the writing section?

anonymous · Answer

No one answers anything there that's literally why I asked here

anonymous · Answer

ok well what is your question and I will try to help you.

anonymous · Answer

It was snowing again and I smiled as I stared at the white flakes fluttering by my window. It was christmas, and my day had been one of the best all year. First I had awakened in the morning to the sound of my brother runing madly around the house, yelling that it was Christmas. Jumping out of bed, i skipped happily down the stairs, with my brother at my heels, and made my way to the Christmas tree in the living room. My parent’s groggily walked down the stairs to watch us open up our presents. My Mom sat down on the couch and dad plopped himself on the floor, grumbling something about coffee. I started opening my presents because, after all, its ladies first. Ripping open the wrapping paper, I stared down at my brand-new pink boom box. It was beautiful? even more, it came with little, stick-on jewels to decorate the boom box. Mom and Dad finally got their coffee and we all took turns watching each other open presents. I get many more presents that were absolutely amazing. Every one spends the rest of the day admiring their gifts and playing with their new toys. "I will remember this Christmas forever, I thought. sighing contentedly, I finally turned away from the snow danceing outside the window and rejoined my family.

anonymous · Answer

I have to find 20 things in here that need to be fixed

happy_to_help · Answer

christmas needs to be a capital C
brand-new doesnt need the (-) because there two different words.
It was beautiful?  take off the question mark

anonymous · Answer

Thank you! I only need three more

anonymous · Answer

*Christmas(cap C) *I(cap I) *parents(no apostrophe) *it's(apostrophe) *Dad(cap D) *beautiful,(comma afterwards) *little sticks(no comma) *spent forever"(quotations to signify the end of the thought)