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OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

I have too many words in my second body paragraph.. Can someone help me remove a few sentences? My essay is on Hills Like White Elephants. Theme- choices

OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

Word count 397... I can only have 200-250 words

OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

@Directrix

OpenStudy (anonymous):

The way you wrote it makes me confused I can try to shorten it but I would need to know who your audience is,children or parents?

OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

Its a rough draft so Im still working on it.. I don't have an audience.

OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

Any ideas on what I can remove? @jaeuni

OpenStudy (destinyyyy):

Its perfect thank you. I will award you best response. Can you remove both of your responses so that I am not accused of plagiarism.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

lol np

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