Revise this sentence using parallel structure.

Rebecca began riding her bike to and from work because she knew that bicycles are better for the environment than cars, she is wanting to increase her aerobic exercise, she also hoped to live longer.

Question

Revise this sentence using parallel structure.

Rebecca began riding her bike to and from work because she knew that bicycles are better for the environment than cars, she is wanting to increase her aerobic exercise, she also hoped to live longer.

blackfireskull · Answer

@Theloshua

theloshua · Answer

Rebecca began riding her bike to and from work because she knew that bicycles are better for the environment than cars, she also wants to increase her aerobic exercise and live longer.