Anyone read Ernest Hemingway Hills like White Elephants? I need assistance removing words and fixing my conclusion for my essay.
Im writing an essay on the short story and could use someones help.. I need to complete my conclusion and remove words. Five Paragraph Essay. 700 word minimum/ 750 word maximum: introduction, 3 body paragraphs, & conclusion.
Word count requirements- Intro- 100+ Each body- 200-250 Conclusion- 50+
Corrected error in my intro- Ernest Hemingway, a well-known American writer, was born in Oak Park, Illinois, in 1899.
grade?
College.
ohim not in college yet I cant help with that sorry
What grade are you in?
@Ashleyisakitty Can you please help me?
You want revision on your conclusion paragraph?
Yes. Im absolutely horrible at conclusion paragraphs. I need it fixed and words to be removed from my essay. Im over the limit.
"The theme of "choices" has been explained using three literary elements: setting, symbolism, and irony. The main choice in the story is of having an abortion and the American staying with Jig, or keeping their unborn child and being abandoned by the American. The setting illustrates where the two main characters are, and how the train station is a type of symbolism. The irony is shown by the man forcing his desire to not have a child onto Jig, but wanting her to want it herself."
Thats perfect thank you!! ... Now to continue destroying my essay so that it has the required limit.
YW. You want to consider changing the sentence in the intro paragraph from "uses these three literary elements, setting, symbolism, and irony" to "utilizes a variety of literary elements". That way you can cut down your word count as well as not be repetitive throughout your essay.
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