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oregonduck (oregonduck):

Can someone help me write my intro paragraph plz

oregonduck (oregonduck):

Beginning Characters: Dan Clark and Christopher Watson Setting: The Cascade mountain range about 8 am in the morning 2. Middle Conflict: The bus that they use to travel around, breaks now in the mountains and they do not know what to do Rising Action: 1. Calling someone for help 2. And making a fire for someone can find them via smoke Climax: A news helicopter spots the smoke when it is flying looking for traffic problems 3. End Resolution of conflict: The helicopter pinpoints where the smoke is coming from and calls in backup to help the circus people away and mechanic came and fix the battery of the bus. Reflection: Never give up always find a way for people to rescue you. HERE IS THE PLOT

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@pinklion23

OpenStudy (pinklion23):

yeah im here :)

OpenStudy (pinklion23):

wait i can not write a pharagraph for u o.o

oregonduck (oregonduck):

Write an introduction of 75 words or more. Be sure to include: description of setting introduction to main characters hook your reader with a vivid description or interesting quote

oregonduck (oregonduck):

@Christian_10_

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I don't think anyone is going to actually write it for you.

oregonduck (oregonduck):

i said HELP ME WRITE IT duh!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

you can start it with dialogue, a description of the setting, or the type of weather they had on that day

oregonduck (oregonduck):

ok, like this?: On a clear morning just after sunrise, the bus where all the circus crew travel in, just entered the cascade mountain range.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

That's a good start BUT Dan and Christopher aren't part of the circus.

oregonduck (oregonduck):

WAIT WHAT

OpenStudy (anonymous):

remember how in the story your teacher gave you, they were just two boys who saw the poster. "Two boys paused to read this notice, pasted with pictures of elephants and circus performers on the high board fence near Stoddard's grocery store. They were Dan Clark and Christopher Watson, called Kit for short."

oregonduck (oregonduck):

oh yeah

OpenStudy (anonymous):

You can put something like this as your first sentence On a clear morning just after sunrise, a (size and color) bus entered the cascade mountain range.

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