Question

Here's a poem I wrote while I was extremely bored and distracted to pass the time. Feedback and constructive criticism is always appreciated ^_^

Answer 1

'Distracted'

I'm bored out of my mind
Trying to pass the time
Supposed to be getting work done
But I can't focus at all

I need a mental escape
To relieve myself
But the internet is down
And the television is gone

The books are all done and read
And the games for more than one
So I might just act dead
Roasting under the sun

I'll probably just sit here
Writing words down
Until my brothers return
From their trip into town

Trying to come up with logical rhymes
That usually works out well
I do it almost all the time
But right now they're sketchy as hell

I'll just try to formulate
A sequence to amaze
To bewilder any person of late
Who happens to follow my gaze

Trying to curb my tendency
To waste all my time
Distractions get the best of me
And make me want to rhyme

Why is it that I always find
My focus has a missing link
Between trying to keep my mind
And my ability to think

Now I'm finding it hard to write
And easier to think
I'm losing interest in my plight
Running low on mental ink

Dun dun deh de dun dun de duh
Dun dun deh de dun
Dun dun deh de dun dun de duh
Dun dun deh de dun

Answer 2

I thought it was interesting. Well done, @JackofallTradez

Answer 3

Thank you for your feedback, @YoungStudier ^_^

Answer 4

You're welcome. :)