Question

What should I do better?

Answer 1

If you have to write an essay about that topic, I recommend that you start by focusing on your principal activity (for example studying). Since you dedicate a lot of your time to this activity, it becomes very important to be good at it.
Besides, the main activity in a person's life should be related to his likes and preferences. When a person likes or loves what he does, he is very good at doing it.
To summarize, I recommend that to answer this question, you base your response on your main activity and on the things you like doing the most.

Answer 2

Thank you!