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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Can someone read my intro paragraphs. I wrote an anecdote for the first paragraph because i thought it would make a nice hook... but now im not sure if it should keep it cause i can seem to make it flow with my thesis? (personal narrative) can someone quickly read it and give me some tips D:

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