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Just Let Go.Did you see me?Did you see me cry?Will you watch me?Will you watch me die?LET GO.Did you love me?Or was it a lie?Did you need me?Or was I just a good time?Well Now.We’ll find out.I stand here.Split Open.TearsStreaming.BloodFlowing.BLEED.BLEED.JUST BLEED.ILL BLEED.COME ON COME ON,DO YOU LOVE ME?As I,BLEED.Will you just watch ME?Will you walkAWAY.Or will you stop the FLOW?Darlin’ will youSTAY?AS I BLEED.Blood.Crimson red.Color of roses.Color of death.Hold me or let me go?No more games,Ive got to KNOW.Come on Come on.You gonna stop the flow?Come on Come on.Let me know.LET GO

Answer 1

@ChantySquirrel1129**

Answer 2

@Ghostgate

Answer 3

@BellaRave Wow... I'm practically speechless, it was beautiful, it fits in line with lyrics I would write so it seems(at least to me) cooler.

Here's my opinion of what you could change as something different:
"Just Let Go.
Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?
LET *GO*.
Did you love me?
Or was that just a lie? (I don't think Or was it a lie fits, Or was that just a lie sounds better.)
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?
Well now, *now*, we'll find out as I stand here. (Modified.)
My heart is split open, tears are streaming, my blood is flowing as it pours out.
*BLEED*, JUST *BLEED*, I'LL *BLEED*.
COME ON, COME ON, DO YOU LOVE *ME*? [Or was I just a good time?]
As I, *BLEED*.
Will you just watch me, or will you help me?
I'm dying, will you stop the blood from flowing?
Darling will you *STAY* with me, AS I *BLEED*.
The blood on the floor is crimson red, the color of roses, the color of *death*.
Either hold me or let me go?
No more games, I've got to *KNOW*.
Come on, Come on. [Please just tell me]
Will you stop the flow?
Come on, Come on. [Please just tell me]
Let me *KNOW*, or let me go."

I know you probably don't want me doing this, but this is my opinion.
I hope this helps, perhaps?
{---Ghostgate---}

Answer 4

Wow, very emotional! I love the line, "Color of roses. Color of death." because you have two different things that you wouldn't be very likely to see together, but you somehow, created a song/poem that made these two seem perfect together! I admire your taste.

Do you listen to music when you write songs? c:

Answer 5

@ChantySquirrel1129** yea i do

Answer 6

@Ghostgate thanks

Answer 7

I thought so c: I notice that a lot of great poets/song writers listen to music while writing because of the strong inspiration it gives them. You my friend, have great writing skills c:

I love it :3

Answer 8

@ChantySquirrel1129** That is true, however I tend to try and keep a specific song in my head or create my own beat for a song when writing out lyrics. I just thought I should mention that.

Answer 9

@BellaRave No problem! ;)

Answer 10

Oh fing my