Question

Ka-Pow Game Design announces its first ever computer take-back program. People may bring unwanted computers, monitors, printers, and cables to Ka-Pow's offices, located in our city, any Friday in July of this year for ecologically sound recycling. Ka-Pow CEO Jessie Harst says, "We look forward to serving the community and the environment with this program."

Which revision best eliminates wordiness in the paragraph while maintaining meaning?

Answer 1

Ka-Pow Game Design announces its computer take-back program. People may bring computers, monitors, printers, and cables to Ka-Pow's offices any Friday in July for ecologically sound recycling. CEO Jessie Harst says, "We look forward to serving the community and the environment with this program."

Ka-Pow Game Design announces its first ever computer take-back program. Bring unwanted computers, monitors, printers, and cables to Ka-Pow's offices, located in our city, any Friday in July of this year for ecologically sound recycling. "We look forward to serving the community and the environment with this program."

Ka-Pow Game Design announces its computer take-back program. People may bring unwanted computers, monitors, printers, and cables to Ka-Pow's offices any Friday in July of this year for ecologically sound recycling. Jessie Harst says, "We look forward to serving the community and the environment with this program."

Ka-Pow Game Design announces its first ever computer take-back program. People may bring unwanted computers, monitors, printers, and cables to Ka-Pow's offices, located in our city, any Friday in July of this year for ecologically sound recycling. Ka-Pow CEO Jessie says, "We look forward to serving the community and the environment with this program."

I'm thinking it's the first one, A

Answer 2

@YoungStudier

Answer 3

I'm not sure, sorry.

Answer 4

It's okay, thanks for looking.