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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Can someone help me rephrase my claim? Claim: GPS transmitters should automatically be downloaded into all electronics.

OpenStudy (mynameisnemo):

How do you need it rephrased? It sounds pretty clear to me? In what way do you need it to be phrased?

OpenStudy (mynameisnemo):

You are saying that you believe all electronics should have a GPS automatically installed onto them. Your claim seems to be very clear.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

For my conclusion paragraph it says that I need to rephrase my claim.

OpenStudy (mynameisnemo):

Hm, maybe you could try to phrase it like I did? "I believe all electronics should have a GPS automatically installed onto them. "

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