Question

I need people I don't know to review this song I've recorded. It's a work in progress. Let me know what you think. https://www.soundtrap.com/play/IWla0J-uRuO8vUeUbrFhjw/time-is-running-out/


I redid the first one a little bit and I just recorded a new one. It was a bit rushed. Tell me what you think. Here's the link: https://www.soundtrap.com/play/EQWlnuRKSh2Puy1oAZWH6Q/self-control/

Answer 1

i like the trumpet part, the music is kind of drowning out the singing. Overall pretty good.

Answer 2

r u the one singing????

Answer 3

Yeah I need to redo the vocals

Answer 4

you sound good :D

Answer 5

Thanks. Any suggestions for improvement?

Answer 6

I like it! The trumpet part was a very creative addition. You have a nice voice, but I think you should record it one more time to get out the small errors in vocals

Answer 7

what instrument is that? it almost sounds like banjo

Answer 8

Thanks for listening. I agree. I think I'll probably redo the vocals tonight and see if I can get a better sound. And yes, it is a banjo.

Answer 9

Please let me know when you re-record it! Also, yes! I knew it was banjo! :) haha

Answer 10

This is Amazing! please keep recording!!!
1 suggestion, maybe make you're voice POP a little bit more.
BUT IM TELLING YOU, YOU ARE REALLY TALENTED!!! KEEP SINGING!! :D

Answer 11

I think that this song is great, but you might want to turn down your bass guitar just a little and bring out your vocals. :) I love your vocals

Answer 12

Thanks for the advice. I took everything into consideration and updated the links. Tell me what you think?

Answer 13

I'll probably redo the vocals on the second song. I think I'll be adding drum tracks soon as well.

Answer 14

the link doesnt play, but i would like to hear your song. any alternatives?

Answer 15

I really like your voice but you should make the instrument quieter or sing louder but over all i really enjoyed it thanks for sharing!!

Answer 16

I like it. :D Not a lot of music makes me feel calm but this song does. If you ever put it on iTunes, tell me, I'll buy it.

Answer 17

Thank for the comments. You people are too nice. Here's soundcloud links if the other links don't work:

https://soundcloud.com/tanner-nelson16/time-is-running-out

https://soundcloud.com/tanner-nelson16/self-control

I've decided to take on the challenge of a full length album. Once I finish editing the first song I'll let you guys just download it and I'll hopefully have the full album available for purchase by the first of next year.

Answer 18

The whole song sounds so good I have copied the link and shared it with my friends and they say it is really good!

Answer 19

@tanner23456 yu there

Answer 20

Hey thanks. Rock on

Answer 21

*applause*

Answer 22

Great!! (:

Answer 23

OMG YOU SOUND LIKE A PRO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 24

Thanks everybody. All of this is very encouraging.

Answer 25

holy crap, your so good, will you make an album??? you should!!! and the song is so empowering!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!

Answer 26

Hey thanks. I really appreciate that. I plan to record an album here soon.

Answer 27

YAY!

Answer 28

You can now buy this song on Itunes if you would like to.

https://itunes.apple.com/en/album/id1075736861?at=11lS7t