Question

I wrote a poem. anyways, i was wondering if anyone can figure out what it is about
her it goes:
for the ones who escaped the wrath
moving forward yet stumbling back
we've all tried a different path
somehow it always ends in a bloodbath
a day without leaves one tight and dry
with one is flithy yet sublime
no longer a take for high
it is our passerbys of lifetime
foul consumers we are
of the inchworm beneath our nose
from sanity we are far
a shock and it gives us a go
our secret holder most pure yet filthy
of this white friend we have, we'll never be free.

Answer 1

1. Poetry belongs in the english or literature section. Not the music section.

2. If you're intending your poem to have one interpretation then you shouldn't be writing poetry. Poetry should identify with an individual on a personal level. What you meant shouldn't be required of the reader/interpreter to understand.

Answer 2

I cant tell if your being rude or not. Anyways poetry makes up lyrics, do you think that songs are just written magically. stanzas become verses in a song just fyi. but its ok that you do not understand that, some people just dont understand music to a higher level of thinking and feeling.

Answer 3

If you've detected rudeness or hostility I apologize. I just have a very blunt way I'd my point across.

First of all. Have you ever written a song? The majority of songs I've written start out as melodies and then I write the words. As with most song writers I know. Second, I would be fine with you posting this if you had any intention of turning this into a song. But you don't do you? I just get sick of people posting all these "lyrics" and hardly anybody posts real songs.

Answer 4

Actually I did, but my intentions should not matter, because if an idea is ht own than how can it develop, i want people to understand my intentions of these lyrics.