Question

Unravel (Real Rap)

Answer 1

(Verse 1)
Iv done had it up to here no more roofs to go mad letting the devil run me over feel like ducking for cover but i wanna take your shots and pain if i could have your problems and let you have my blessings you're one since you came in my life so if you took all mine i still got you but i dont got you right now i got a fragment on my mind always in my prayer book always in my raps constantly that’s why you don’t see me making real raps cuz this is the real me when i don’t try to conceal it when im with you i feel elevated Himalayas i lay it on my track its gonna always be on repeat i love you, I love you so why listen to anyone who hates you, you told me to screw em all yet your screwed up in an out so father I lay my needs before you you saved my life now save hers cuz i dont wanna live without her and right now she’s flat-lining.


(Chorus x2)
Father the love you have shown me others just can't see the ones i love do not see you in the same light so i let the tears fall my heart is on fire at the sight of her pain it hurts to see her in this agony and depression father i ask you to lay hands on us both because one touch from you is enough to heal your presence is enough to free us my faith lies i feel one with this person as if their soul is my own i ask you to unravel my soul and breathe into me unravel my soul and mend my heart unravel me father and fill us up with you.

(Verse 2)
Redeemer you know better than I and you know me the world is twisted to me sickening and reality seems to be gone but you stay the people i love fading away but you stay with one message to say "I love you" i love you in your good and bad, i love you even though you walk away from me, i love you even though you hate and despise me, i love you even though you dont believe in me, i love you even though you hate yourself i love you even though you sin i love you, i love you no matter what you've you cut yourself yet these hands have taken the full piercing of nails for you i bleed for you i died for you i cry for you because to others you may seem like a waste but you me you are priceless a timeless message that remains throughout the ages teach me how to express this guide me how to simply show it because it seems to be forgotten inside i am shaken you're unbreakable, unshakeable so contaminate my soul with you.


(Chorus x2)
Father the love you have shown me others just can't see the ones i love do not see you in the same light so i let the tears fall my heart is on fire at the sight of her pain it hurts to see her in this agony and depression father i ask you to lay hands on us both because one touch from you is enough to heal your presence is enough to free us my faith lies i feel one with this person as if their soul is my own i ask you to unravel my soul and breathe into me unravel my soul and mend my heart unravel me father and fill us up with you.

Answer 2

dude, thats good!!

Answer 3

Yes!!!! It is amazing raps like this that make like rap in the first place!!!! Beautiful!!!