Question

i need to write a poem for a project and i wrote one but i dont know if it would be good so can someone tell me what they think Will give medel and what ever else i can give

Answer 1

love is pain, as i sit hear tears roll down my face i thought i had something but in reality she lied killing me inside so as i think of a reason to live i find nothing but pain sorrow and hatred so as i cry my self to sleep i think of her betrayal.

Answer 2

so what do yall think

Answer 3

@Rushwr

Answer 4

@dan815

Answer 5

this is dew tomorrow

Answer 6

You might have more luck posting this in the English or literature section. Seems how this the music section. Not the poetry section.

Answer 7

yeah im sorry

Answer 8

hey dude, i can help u out if u want, this poem seems to broad, but i would be happy to help.

Answer 9

ok

Answer 10

is there a topic for this

Answer 11

i dont think there is

Answer 12

so its just writing a poem ? maybe try add some like more happy like ; love i like pain but easily killed,many think its just a reality but some a tragity.
its a start but try to relate to ppl sometimes ppl will relate bck

Answer 13

ok i can try to do that

Answer 14

OK give me like a topic u want to do maybe i can help u do something

Answer 15

I think it's good, maybe like @THC_gamer4life said it seem a little broad, but still sounds great to me.

Answer 16

alright I keep getting notifications about this so I think I'll chime in. It's a pretty dark poem. With poetry, you want people to think and ponder not worry about the writer's emotional stability. Another poem about a teenager wanting to kill himself over his girlfriend is not my idea of an original poetic masterpiece. I suppose that may just be my opinion. Poetry is about controlling your emotions and fashioning them into multi-interpretive portrayal of those feelings.

Answer 17

Definitely what Tanner said.